Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Example Poem from Character Sketch Prompt




one long dirty nail 
on the index finger 
of his right hand

extends 
perpendicular to the cheese
and club-cracker hors d' oeuvre 

he holds
i shop the isles 
of the grocery store 
debit card in hand

try to decide      between 
generic and name-brand 
soda      whether or not to 
buy ice cream and eye 

this abominable snowman
dressed in army surplus
a wrinkled gray-green canvas 
hat holds down the wiry 
mess salt and pepper spaghetti 

hair     he moves in small 
quick jerks like the squirrel 
in my backyard---wary 
of the watching 

people     he stuffs his 
jacket and khaki shorts
with tooth-picked cubes of holiday 
ham    rocks back and forth 

on the Birkenstock sandals
that moor him---crew socks 
and all to the sample-station 
buffet    i think he looks 

like someone who would
keep his money in tin 
can ---buried    if 
he had any     but he 

probably      lives 
---under the Austin Highway 
bridge     i think he needs 

a bath and i wonder      where
---he'll eat his next meal

i think
he wishes 
winter wouldn't come

from:  Young Writer's Idea Box, © D. Ellis Phelps (work in progress), 2013, www.dellisphelps.com. You may use and distribute this page for educational purposes with the above reference.

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